Perfect Storm

 

Whirling, crashing,whistling

Sunshiny raindrops

as big as giant lemon drops

Snowy, thunderous skies

lightening ripping through

the mist

The perfect storm..

Every element of mother natures force

happening at a moment

of self depreciation

Flash floods and

death

Exploding into our wonderous world

A vision of pure perfection

clouded by the swirling wind

I see your eyes

as blue as the richest waters

you see my tears

as deep as the darkest sea.

Reviews

[robert harris jr]

outstanding poem very well told in time and space

[darkgurl]

"I see your eyes
as blue as the richest waters
you see my tears
as deep as the darkest sea."

These lines just sum up the whole write, Such a depth of emotions on this piece, wonderfully written....Kim

[Aspiring Angel]

A storm of human emotion expressed so forcefully here. Wonderful imagery. Blessings, Lesa

[Ray Hamilton]

Whirling, crashing,whistling
Sounds like my divorce LOL
Wonderfully written as always
Ray

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Perfect way to describe a storm as human emotion... I really enjoyed it!!