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My life is like a whirlpool

spinning out of control

sweeping

dipping

and shaking

with pure white emotion

Come sit with me

for a while

watch the wind,

see the river

observe the glamour

The whole world is there

for our entertainment

grasp it

keep it

and savour

the complete bitter sweet

wonder

of life.

Reviews

[Ray Hamilton]

Wonderful write as always
I enjoyed this, I would sit with you anytime
Ray

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

wonderfully done and so true, we need to sit back sometimes and enjoy the tranquillity of nature, it can teach us about slowing down and taking everything that comes our way and still stay strong.