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Home


Home is what drinks time
and eats life away into memory,
where you live and die, so sublime,
yet you never know this simple mystery.

Home is the real you;
it is where you laugh and cry,
it is your tears---like morning dew;
a nourishing reminder from the sky.

It is what keeps your heart warm;
it is love and love is kind.
Home is every shape and form

.of your tranquil state of mind

Home is where your heart is found

.and where you are safe and sound

Author's Note

Enjoy.

Reviews

[Dave]

So true!

Take care - Dave

[.......]

wow very nicely written, love the rhyme scheme

[Tracey C.]

Very Nice! I agree with this poem! This was also well-written (great job)

[black.butterfly]

Thank you.

[Tracey C.]

You are welcome =)

[Undying Glory]

how epicly true haha. this is so relatable and very good indeed. very vivid work here. and i love that rhyming too, that really makes this poem good.
"Home is the real you;
it is where you laugh and cry,
it is your tears---like morning dew;
a nourishing reminder from the sky"
now i really liked that stanza!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like how this piece comes together, Home but the ending blended right into my heart as to what Home is to me.
Nice work.

[Kal]

I can feel the warmth of this poem..
Well written!

[DrD]

I am impressed. i have not read your work before but I will be reading more.

[teardrop]

a wonderful heart warming write.

[Bianca]

amazing if you ask me. i love how you put in on how everybody has their ups and downs in their own house by saying that is where you laugh and cry. truly amazing. thank you for posting it