Believe

For the longest time

I felt so empty

like i had no faith

but you took all my worry

i knew i was missing something

but i wasnt sure what

i found out that you died for me

you shed your blood

why did it take me so long

for me to find you

but then suddenly

my love for you grew

i never want to lose you

you have become my love

the one i found

i knew that i was saved

my heart has found you

you will never leave

i am your daughter

i will always believe

Reviews

[Samantha]

thank you for your feedback

[S.J]

I really liked this, I would edit line nine and ten a little. "Why did it take me so long for me to find you?"

At first I thought it sounded a little strange. I would have done, "Why did it take me so long to find you?"

But that's just me. The rest was really good. I enjoyed it.

(coming from a not yet pro). :)