KISS ME!

A poem i wrote for my boyfriend :)

I love the way you kiss me,

Morning noon and night. 

I love the way you kiss me,

It always feels so right.

You always give me shivers,

that run down my spine.

My body shakes and quivers,

I smile knowing your mine.

I love the way you kiss me,

no matter where we are,

weather were at home, on a walk

or even in your car.

I love the way it feels,

when our lips slowly meet.

Its only then my fate seals

and i know with you im complete.

So kiss me baby anyplace, anytime, anywhere ;)

cause quite frankly i love you to much to care. 

Other people glance over, think what they may,

I smile when you show me off anyway :)

I love the way you kiss me,

Morning noon and night.

I love the way you kiss me,

your my Mr Right :)

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Cimmy, I smiled the whole time I was reading this. I can tell that you and your boyfriend are very much in love with each other. Wow. Best wishes for both of you. :)

As for the poem, I like the effortless flow of thoughts. Good rhythm and pacing and all that. I also admire your effective rhyme scheme. And I enjoy the images as well.

I love the way it feels,
when our lips slowly meet.
Its only then my fate seals
and i know with you im complete.


and

So kiss me baby anyplace, anytime, anywhere ;)
cause quite frankly i love you to much to care.
Other people glance over, think what they may,
I smile when you show me off anyway :)


I love the way you kiss me,
Morning noon and night.
I love the way you kiss me,
your my Mr Right :)

-My favorite stanzas oozing with sweetness of romance. :)

Just one little thing, though. Some of the words are misspelled but that's something you can work on easily. :) :)

P.S. This poem makes me want to have a b oyfriend, too. Lol :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww your review is the best review i have ever received :) thank you blue you made my day, you really gave me a huge review :) Thanks so much for taking your time to review this :) I know your a busy woman :P

Im so glad you liked it :)
I know my spelling sucks and thats with spell check, you should see it without that on paper lol....
Awww you seem like an amazing girl, your guys out there i know he is :)

[Fran Marie]

A delightful read, sweet and very cleverly written~ nice worK!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you Fran :)

[BubblingMe]

Cooool I also love the pictures in your poem

[Sarah Lynn]

A great poem! Im sure ever girl has their mister right out there way they feel this way ! I know i do ! Great pictures you put in this poems as well!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks hun glad you enjoyed this peace :) thanks for all your reviews :)

[Sarah Lynn]

You're very welcome !(:

[Me]

Love it...cute read...loving those lips :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wish i could get that done to my lips, looks awesome some of em :)
thanks for reading :)

[Riding the Rainbow]

OH MAN!
I loved it!!! Wow! This is love;)))

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks so glad you liked it :)

[Sarmelendez]

This just show how much you care for him :) and that is so great that you can use your relationship and the feeling you have for him to make such a great and loving poem here.

thanks for sharing

Sarah :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for your kind review Sarah :) your sweet :)

[Chris]

I'm sure your boyfriend liked it...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

he did thanks for your review :)

[Chris]

Cool pics to float within it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[Katho28]

very cute and sweet :) lovely poem and love the rhyming.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much :)

[annabellee]

such a cute poem, I liked how you repeated the first stanza. It has a good flow and good rhymes.
I really enjoyed reading it :)
Well done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Anna im glad you enjoyed the read :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)