YOUR IM-PERFECTIONS

WHAT MARK SAYS/THINKS ABOUT ME. I TURNED HIS WORDS INTO POETRY :)

Pictures deleated because of your smile,
you hate how your front teeth seem to stick out.
I wish you smiled more then once in awhile,
It makes you you, and its cute without a doubt.

 

You hate your strech marks oh so much,
its so very unatractive you say.
You stress and wish they'd go away,
To me your skin is perfect with every touch.

 

You say your putting on a little weight,
Although you cant put your chocolate down.
To me your bodys perfect with nothing to hate,
I think your just being a clown.

 

You seem to find so much to pick on, so many folts and flaws,
You should give yourself a break your beautiful, I still can't belive im yours.
You look at all the bad forgeting all the good,
If only you saw yourself the way I do, oh I wish you could.

 

Because you call all these things imperfections without a secound thought,
but to me you couldnt be any more perfect, your priceless you cant be brought.

 

Reviews

[mark]

awww babe this is great...thats right ur perfect to me no matter how much u hate things bout urself...those things dont matter...it doesnt make me love u anymore or any less :) well done for putting my words into a poem lol you can do anything with ur writing ur amazing :) i love the write babe well done :) i love you and ill see you tonight xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im glad you liked it :) Hehe thank you i love you so much :)
Ill see you tonight :)

[mark]

hehe :) ur welcome i love you more xxxooo

[mark]

hehe :) ur welcome i love you

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww thanks hun i got it the first time thought :"P

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most telling and simple piece that recited without caution, refreshing to read such honesty and openness, well done, good read.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

That's me honest, and open.
Thank you for your review :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

I love the juxtaposition that you have here. Visual trickey where you didn't mind the trickeration in order to get your point across.. Well done

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for the wonderful review :)

[Matching Socks]

This is so very sweet. :)
It's lucky to have someone special.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you very much :)
I know I am :)

[Matching Socks]

Awwww, good. :)
Sounds like you both know!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:) :) :) :)

[Jennie Baron]

How did I miss reviewing this one? It's so adorable, romantic and heartwarming. Well done. We should all have someone who says such sweet things to us and overlooks our imperfections.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you very much :)

[Debra]

I love this! We are own worst critics.
I can honestly say, without a doubt, I feel more sexy and alive at 50 than I did at any other time in my life. The reason? Because I learned to love myself, flaws and all.
Now, I am embrace them, cause they make me who I am.

(and the comments from your honey below, are so darn adorable. Listen to him.)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank yo so much for your wonderful review :)

[Debra]

You are welcome!

[Afraa]

This piece just gave 'romantic' a whole new meaning. I think I can safely say, this is one of the top prettiest love poems I have ever read. You know, this piece subconsciously put a smile on my face. It has a cute side to it, and just forces a person to go "aww!" This is just a masterpiece, enough said. Great picture depiction too!

Thank you for penning down such lovely thoughts.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This review means so much to me seriously :)
Thank you so much :)
Glad you enjoyed.

[Ethan Brill]

You're a lot sweeter than me :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

What the poem? My boyfriend? or me? lol

[Ethan Brill]

I'm just saying. When people don't take care of themselves I'm usually not as nice.

[Ethan Brill]

My imperfections are on the inside

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Oh i see :)

[KeeD]

This had all the right kinds of mushy... refreshes an older guy of the hint of first love, new love..its cute and its got passion driven from the heart. Definitely a write that reflects the feelings of the poetess and her conviction towards love. Good work a few grammar issues but they are nothing that can't be fixed with a proof read. Keep writing you're a talented writer.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much for your review. Means allot :)

[Vanesa Markovic]

A very beautiful piece, people really are too often blind to their own perfect beauty.
Lovely work!
-VM

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[Rosalind Gale]

It reminds me of love and tenderness, and of all the wonderful things in life. Stay gold, Cimmy.
Rosalind
-x-

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thanks for the review :) You to :)