YOUR IM-PERFECTIONS

WHAT MARK SAYS/THINKS ABOUT ME. I TURNED HIS WORDS INTO POETRY :)

Pictures deleated because of your smile,
you hate how your front teeth seem to stick out.
I wish you smiled more then once in awhile,
It makes you you, and its cute without a doubt.

 

You hate your strech marks oh so much,
its so very unatractive you say.
You stress and wish they'd go away,
To me your skin is perfect with every touch.

 

You say your putting on a little weight,
Although you cant put your chocolate down.
To me your bodys perfect with nothing to hate,
I think your just being a clown.

 

You seem to find so much to pick on, so many folts and flaws,
You should give yourself a break your beautiful, I still can't belive im yours.
You look at all the bad forgeting all the good,
If only you saw yourself the way I do, oh I wish you could.

 

Because you call all these things imperfections without a secound thought,
but to me you couldnt be any more perfect, your priceless you cant be brought.

 

Reviews

[mark]

awww babe this is great...thats right ur perfect to me no matter how much u hate things bout urself...those things dont matter...it doesnt make me love u anymore or any less :) well done for putting my words into a poem lol you can do anything with ur writing ur amazing :) i love the write babe well done :) i love you and ill see you tonight xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im glad you liked it :) Hehe thank you i love you so much :)
Ill see you tonight :)

[mark]

hehe :) ur welcome i love you more xxxooo

[mark]

hehe :) ur welcome i love you

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww thanks hun i got it the first time thought :"P

[Effector Prime]

the most wonderful poem I've ever read on this premise yet. such a lovely read :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thank you so much :) that means allot :)

[Effector Prime]

you're all the more welcome my friend :)

[Tina Louise UK]

So very sweet hun, you did a wonderful job with this one :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you hun :)

[Tate Morgan]

We dont see the imperfections in the body of those we love

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yes this is true :)Thank you for your review :)

[annabellee]

Awwww, sooo sweeeet!!!
One of your best poems for sure. Glad you found somebody as great as Mark :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thank you Anna :) You think so really?
Thank you im glad to :)

[annabellee]

yeah i do think so, you're most welcome :)

[Erik Daniel]

A beautiful poem. Well done!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[Jack...]

This poem is as beautiful as Mark finds you my friend. Beauty, we are all beautiful in our way especially when someone loves us. Those little imperfections may seem like magnifying glass attractions to us, but to another they are invisible for his love for you can see nothing of the sort. Beautifully penned.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thank you for your wonderful review :)
This is true :)

[Laura Harrison]

You are beautiful inside and out Cimmy, and I am so glad that you have found the person to tell you this when you are feeling insecure. Lovely write hun :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thank you hun you are a sweetheart :) Thank you for your review mwa xxxooo

[Laura Harrison]

Any time; I love reading your work :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww I love reading your work to, I like your new chapters :)

[Sarmelendez]

I really love this hun :) He know what he sees in you and to me it seems as if he is in love with you no matter what. He loves everything about you and those are rare and hard to find. Such a great write :) its going in my favorites

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thank you hun your review was beautiful, as are you :)
We get our inspiration to write from the people we love hehe :P

[Sarmelendez]

this is true

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

what that its as beautiful as you are, yeah i know its true thats why i said it :P
OH you mean the last part :P