I'M GIVING UP!

Many thoughts run through my head tonight,
These many thoughts may be more dark then light.
Thoughts about giving up, as there's only so much i can try, 
Im now at the point when i dont see a reason why?

Im a nice person and a good friend. 
Broken bonds i try to mend. 
Although why do i try so hard, when people dont seem to try in return, 
If our friendships not important to them, then ill watch the fire run and burn.

As for sleeping, i toss and i turn, listen to mum or the boyfriend snore, 
I just want peace and quite, i cant take it anymore. 
So im given up on sleep as well, 
I guess ill have to be tired as hell!

As for happiness that is very rear.
I hardly ever see it, it isnt really there. 
Every now and again it shows up in my life, 
But then it leaves me to the darkness, that cuts me like a knife.

Theirs allot of things in my life that just refuse to work out,
Iv given up fighting, so i wont scream i wont shout. 
Ill surrender for im tired and iv just given in,
Darkness you have surround me, u win.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

It relates with many people's daily life....Sounds very true and created with much care.....Awesome as always.....Full rating.....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[Heart2Soul]

Thank you. Sometimes we just have to let go. A good reminder.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No thank you for your review :)

[Heart2Soul]

My pleasure. I have not yet been through much on this site being new to it all but from what I have seen of your writing, you reverberate with passion. Please never lose it. Ever. This world needs more people with passion.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww thanks so much. you are sweet :)

[KWP]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=VjEq-r2agqc

yeah that's my input :) XX

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks haha :)

[W R Stowe]

Never give up we always have hope as long as we have breath in our lungs.You connect with me cause I really snore loud if on my back,my wife loses seep because of it nicely phrased

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

My heart goes out to your wife then :P
Thank you for reviewing :)

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest thoughts. Sometime we can reach a dead-end. Some folks won't flex or bend. The poem told of struggle and led to learning. Can't repair all things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you so much for your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.