QUESTIONING US!

A poem about how I feel right now. I'm going through a really hard time in my relationship, I'm questioning if we are right for eachother. Doesn't have a title I actually cant think of one.

For so long we have been an us, a duo a team,
but is a happy future together, only a dream.
Although we have plenty of great memories we have shared,
The bad times are outweighing the good and im becoming scared.

Comunication between us well it clearly sucks, its crap,
As much as we say things will change, we keep running the same lap.
I feel like I need someone who understands my emmotional side,
and im over going on your angry, tempramental rides.

We are just to different, we don't agree on hardly anything anymore,
and I don't know if our love is any longer worth fighting for.
Im sick of you coming over acting like everythings fine, and pretending,
My heart breaks from your harsh words, and its no closer to mending.

In the whole time we have been together, we have fought quite allot,
Though your never an a*****e, and the other day you won first spot.
I feel like we hold eachother back, from certain things for sure,
and these feelings I have inside me hurt, but its them I can't ignore.

Are we holding onto eachother, when its time to let eachother go?
That is the question I don't really know.
How do we know when its time to say our goodbyes?
Because im getting over our million trys....

Author's Note

please try to help me with ideas, for this poems title.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the logic of the words. The logic is true for many. They hold on to wish and hope till the love is dead and bury. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you very much for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[barleygirl]

"Does Bad Outweigh Good?" . . . "More Smooth, Less Strife" . . . "Standing on a Precipice"

These are just title ideas . . . your poem is very realistic & heartfelt & relatable. You describe the situation as being on the precipice of two opposing forces: Do we work to make it better or let it go? It's a very difficult decision & even harder to do the painful work involved for either choice. Maybe this is why I haven't had a love relationship in my life for so long . . . it's never black & white. I wish you the best in making the right choice for your life (((HUGS))) This poem is spoken in everyday language that really lets the reader inside your heart & head.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Always a pleasure reading your reviews. Not many people give so much thought and effort into reviews as you do.
Thanks for the title suggestions :)
Yes it is a hard decision for sure...
Thank you for your review :)

[WittyWonka]

Well said! I've been here a few times so i know what you are going through. As for titles you could call it: At a Crossroads, Fork in the Road, Running in Circles, Questioning Us, Time to Decide, or you could play on Hamlet's words to be or not to be and call it: To Stay or Not to Stay.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

That's funny because at the start I did call it to be or not to be, but I didn't love it. I mean I kind of liked it, but thought I may get some better sugestions.
Questioning us is a good title to ill think about that one.
Thank you for your review Witty :)

[WittyWonka]

You are welcome, cimmy.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

going with Questioning us :)
Thanks Witty :)

[WittyWonka]

Awesome, Cimmy :)