The pain we feel

The pain we feel
To my mom

By Jaimemamere

The pain we feel
is really real
But only in our hearts!

I know it well
been through that hell
for what I do not know?

For when she cried
she tried to hide
her tears were there for me

The torment she endured
could not be cured
No matter how hard I prayed

 

For if we look, we will surely find
a love like yours, here in time

The Angeles I see
not just in my dreams
God needs good help sometimes

Reviews

[Lilmissfit]

awwwwww :((( i can relate sooooo well with this one!! this is such a beautiful sad poems, and honestly one of my favorites out of all that i have read. This poem is so selfless, you can feel how badly the writer wants to take her pain away, to give anything to take it instead of her! wonderfull poem!!!! hope to read more of these!

[Ezekiel Silver]

This is a good poem. I like both the message it sends and how you gave it that rhyming sound.