trapped inside

trapped inside
my body is a glass bottle
my soul inside
craving fresh air as madness takes over
trapped like a mouse
my body is no longer mine
my soul fighting
the madness is overwhelming
visions of blood and death
an eerie smile stretched across my face
but i brake the glass
and the madness escapes
and i am left
with a broken mind

Reviews

[VelvetRosetta]

Nice poem!

[Ian H Morrison]

wow this is very good well written and the sentence structure is solid excellent