my mind plays tricks on me

awake or asleep

my mind plays tricks on me

is there more to me i don't know?

or is it that i see more than i can?

am i different from everyone else?

or is  my mind playing tricks on me?

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Excellent. I love this. oh oh oh...so many alarms ringing in my head on such a short write. thought all of this before but never been able to put it into any kind of words, never mind something so succint. So, in summation, i like this a lot.

[Daenerys]

Short, but to the point

[Olivia H.]

Hi Charlene! It's Olivia. Don't you love this website?

Anyway, this was really whimsical but dark at the same time. Kind of reminded me of the Mad Hatter, full on Johnny-Depp-orange-eyebrow style. Love! xx

[Kim's Poems]

love this, wonderful and playful.
Awesome write!