the sea inside of me

the sea inside of me

rips at my soul 

no one can see

the sea inside of me

i try to save myself

from the cold claws of my sea

but all i did was make it worse 

my sea that rips at my soul

the sea inside of me

its to rapped to control

i get swallowed up inside the sea

the sea inside of me

the sea that rips my soul

i have to control my sea

i have to get free

all i have to do is hope

for someone to reach inside of me

and pull me from the sea

free me from my sea

the sea inside me

the sea that rips at my soul 

Reviews

[Otsana]

I love the repetition of the simple words "the sea that rips at my soul" as it emphasises just how much it is tormenting you. I think that everyone has a sea inside of them just trying to drown you in its depths and carry you away with it's forceful tide. Another amazing piece of work.