dark and gloomy

 dark and gloomy

sorrowful and deep

the cave was dreary

but full of sorrow

for the girl whose life

was taken by deaths

greedy hand

she was torn away

by the sorrow in her heart

the darkness welcomed her

promised that the pain

and the sorrow would go away

but every promise is meant to be broken

or at least

thats what she could only believe

when every promise in her life

was broken

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Nice visual effect, takes the reader to another world in away. Very nice phrasing and linking in the structure.