sorry

he broke her heart 

so i broke his skull 

but when i tried to sew her heart back together 

the blood came out too fast

Reviews

[Morgan Yai]

Nicely done. I love when a writer can get a point across in such few words. I feel that it can be just as impactful as a longer poem or story. Thank you for sharing your talent

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Whoa - brutally impactive short write! It reminds me of that old saying two wrongs don't make a right - certainly grabs the reader's attention! :-)