Love

I smile, you frown.

I cry, you laugh.

I sing, you whistle.

I shout, you whisper.

 

I enter, you leave.

I run, you walk.

I sigh, you yawn.

I wave, you turn.

 

I love, you hate.

I need, you don't.

I speak, you think.

I wish, you want.

 

I kiss you, you reject.

I want you, you're taken.

My love is wrong, your hate is right,

But I'll love you forever, all day and all night.

Reviews

[Ellen Hammond]

A very sad, Valentine of unrequited love, but well said.

[Wicahpi]

a sad Valentine poem of love awry.
Thank you for entering my Poetry of Love contest.
Good Luck

[Cassidy Mask]

Beth!! That was truuuullly awesome - so much for writers block! this piece is grrrrrreat - (just like frosties :P)