Red Wing

Beautiful Red Wing
in the clouds she sings
high above human worries
and demands and hurries
on spread wings she soars
close to Heaven's door
playing and having fun
now in the Winter sun
soon to be shining in Spring
what joy it will bring
looking forward to tomorrow
not a touch of sorrow
beautiful Red Wing
will forever sing

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A very creative and musical poem in a way describing the joys of happiness and positive thinking. The images of a beautiful bird flying over a winter landscapes to one of spring, passing by heaven's door shows to me the triumph of celebrating life and appreciating what one has. A truly amazing poem Eric.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!

[Coyote Song]

:}

[zainul]

I congratulate Eric for symbolizing a bird of UK like an angel.
I am impressed by the beauty of Red Wing and find a sense of bliss from her role as
contact between the earth and Heaven.
Very well written.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!

[zainul]

You are welcome.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool piece of work.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[Kenneth The Poet]

No problem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Description gave life to the photo. The animal life can tell many stories if we watch and learn from their action. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Newtothis]

This is such a balanced piece of writing. And joyous...joy making....thank you!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Star Wolf]

Awesome poem! Very beautiful and amazing images!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I think this is a skillfully, vibrant positive poem! What a brilliant write!!

[An owl on the moon]

How your words lift us above the worries and demands of life... lets us sense the beauty of the world on wings... the music that flows so brilliantly... Thank you for sharing such peace!

[Black Cat Fever]

Wow, impressive. Very beautiful and so positive. I really enjoyed this.

[Tina Kline]

Great poem. Beautiful and full of hope. Wonderful imagery and I agree with Leslie, this does have the feel of a rock song. Great work on this poem Eric.