Red Rosebeam

There glows one rose of red
in a black rosebed
she is a scarlet red queen
in the heart of a black rose sea
a mysterious beautiful scene
countless view the majesty
they walk the path near
the roses so dark and dear
the queen smiles supreme
a red rosebeam

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

Very impressive poem. I get the vision of a beautiful queen enjoying her roses while being followed by her group of helpers and admirers all watching what she is doing and recording it on sheets of paper and ink pot quills. Lovely and very unique poem!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Black Cat Fever]

I like this. Enchanting. I see a lovely Queen with her court and I see a lovely rose garden. Cool how this can go both ways. Very skillfully done.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Picture perfecft wording! Imagery was spectacular!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[KAREN]

Paints a beautiful picture, the imagery is stunning!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like the scene that comes to mind as I read this. A red Queen with her court following behind her, worshiping her. Creative and impressive.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine write, that leads me to think about the concepts of similarity and uniqueness, clothed in a poem with good observation and quality.

[Eric Cox]

thank you

[Star Wolf]

Love this imagery of the grandness of a Queen and her court as roses in a garden. Clever, impressive and beautiful! Awesome creation!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Tina Kline]

Wonderful and creative. A reader could also see this as a real Queen as well. Its very enchanting and full of exquisite imagery. An very impressive job on this.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)