Problems, Go Away

Problems can dawn tearing peace to shreds
making us wish for sweet dreams in our beds
often we cannot escape
a worrisome landscape,
problems problems go away
and away you can stay
stop plaguing us with your grip
vacate Earth on the next ship
let peace wear its golden crown
stop tearing us down

Reviews

[Krithika Raghavan]

That was a wonderful symmetric poem, "Worrisome landscape" is particularly enticing.
And yes, let peace wear its golden crown, well said, love this, Keep writing~

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!!!

[Black Cat Fever]

This describes problems to a T.
Well done Eric.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks :)

[Black Cat Fever]

meow

[Coyote Song]

This is an outstanding way to write about our desires for those awful problems life brings us to go away. The imagery is perfectly sinister and very compelling. I really like this one!

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[Coyote Song]

smiles :)

[Tina Kline]

A poem I can really relate to. Problems sometimes feel so overwhelming, rather like monsters in a way. Good job on this.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I sure wish this one could come true, for me, you and all of us. Great poem mot anyone could relate too!

[Eric Cox]

thank you!

[Star Wolf]

Awesome job! I can relate to this fantastic write. I like it!