2 Vampires Forever

She appeared and the curtains flew

from her a magical wind blew

her icy image approached my bed

skin marble white and eyes glowing red

soon I would never face death and be ill

my mortality she would kill

She drank my blood

and gave me hers, so fine

a sweet red flood

as sweet as wine

Now I walk the Earth as she

blessed with magic eternally

she's my lovely vampiress

my old life I never miss

she and I live in ecstasy

our deepest desires run free

together forever under the night sky

our souls will never again cry.

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

Amazing poem. Deeply romantic too. She gave a wonderful gift, immortality. No suffering death and decay. No growing old and facing death. I'd want that. Love the imagery in this, it's powerful in its allure and seduction. Love the artwork! There is something very seductive about vampires. They have what we all want, life eternal! thanks for sending me this poem to read!!!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!! I appreciate your comments. :)

[Coyote Song]

:)

[Star Wolf]

LOve theSE dark ROMantic VAmpIRE poems of yours. They have the perfect blend of chill and romance with blood thrown in just to make it kinky and erotic.

[Black Cat Fever]

Very darkly romantic. I like the way you write, never too many extra words. A very happy ending to this, an end to all mortal pains.

[Fran Marie]

now she's my vampiress

my old life I never miss

she and I live in ecstasy

Blissful romance penned in a delicous dark verse ~ am lovin' it'

Thanks for sharing in midnight madness

[Sean M. Addams]

very cool piece ... like the romantic feel mixed with darkness ... overall a very chilling write!!

[Samantha]

It was sweet but still portrayed how horrifieing vamps can be. I've read a couple of vampire poems and this one is very good. Good job.

[Tina Kline]

A chilling yet rather romatic vampire poem. I really
do like it a lot!

Tina