Blood, Blood

A vampire rising from bloody doom.

Blood, oozing from my eyes
blood curdling internal cries
my heart gushing red
veins bursting in my head
my body so out of whack
the future darker than black
bleak, bloody doom
blood red gloom
a blood red tomb
Blood, oozing from my mouth, why
blood veins bursting as I cry
a blood red coffin awaits
a blood creature awakes
blood, I hear my body cry
a crimson river to never dry.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a powerful, dark rhythm that flows through your work. Powerful and moving.

[Black Cat Fever]

This sounds like one unhappy vampire waking up. I'm sure he'll feel better once he has some blood. I like this poem, hearing the vampire;'s thoughts and his despair, very personal like.

[Coyote Song]

A very vivid and impressive poem. Its almost as if the vampire is screaming in agony upon waking to discover that they are no longer human but a blood drinking immortal. I fell into this ones dark and powerful spell.

[Star Wolf]

This is a really awesome vampire poem. Love the voice of the vampire in this, one vampire who isn't over joined by the turning process.

[Stacey Watts]

Very dark and very well written. I really enjoyed this read. You write about this very well. Excellent work.

[Tina Kline]

This is an exceptionally good vampire poem. Superb writing and unique imagery in this. I truly enjoyed reading this! :)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Wow! Love this vampire poem. So different and unique, love the vampire telling what is happening to him. Excellent rhyming. You did an outstanding job on this cool poem!