motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

I am a Rolls Royce
tendered to lusty four winds
passion is my quest...
You are a difficult act to follow...
truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Pat.

j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those Rolls Royces...are tough to follow...

:)))

[Renée]

Oh I do like this one... I hear the vroom, vroom of September love !

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Renee....you are kind.
j.

[Renée]

Back at ya J

[andrew mitchell]

Fantastic brevity Jacob as always. i'm glad you didn't say a four wheel cannon!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew...

j.

[Miss Sharon]

Yahoo! Love that gunning the engine thing going on Jacob. I enjoy writing the Japanese forms....the discipline of 17 syllables is a challenge for we "run-at-the-mouth" writers! LOL

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Sharon...

i tend to believe in that phrase, "less is more"----

brevity allows for creativeness on the part of the reader...

thank you again for your visit, and for the smile..

[Miss Sharon]

Welcome! Always smiling here....well most of the time. ;>)

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Laughing............................................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, lynn.

j.

[Antonio Valentino]

its hell getting old especially when the exhaust pipe is sputtering..

enjoyed this :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that's funny, thanks Antonio for the smile...

[Antonio Valentino]

funny eh.. tell that to my.. cough cough wife haha

[Miss Sharon]

LOL...yes that IS funny Antonio!

[Ken Simm.]

Don't burn out your clutch.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'm not good with love, but i am pretty easy on a clutch...:)))
thank you, Ken.

j.

[rubie]

careful not to burn out your motor while you race towards the destination.

slow and steady wins the race....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when it comes to love, i have never been a good driver...Raymond is better than i....

[emmajoy]

Should i really be laughing at this? Rather think it could mean this.. or that.. or surely not that! Which- and whatever, tis clever cool and oh so interesting. Makes me smile and that's the best reward for today.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

laughing is just fine...:)))

thank you, emma...

j.

[Kshitij Srivastava]

A better engine in a compact body will have your time saved. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

true...thank you Kshitij...

j.