dramatic intent

dramatic intent

 

 

 

bilingual fortune

poetry of disassociation

 

words in brazen context

said one way, meant another

 

some get rich off the pain of others

and the accent marks

 

never really stay in their place.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/28/15

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

disguised are words and the mask that hides them! A write to ponder on!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, andrew...

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... "the accent marks never really
stay in their place...". Touché... truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Pat!

j.

[jeannemarie coulter]

fine write...makes one think about what we say and what we really mean

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, jeannemarie.

j.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

When the accent marks fall out of place, the fake accent is exposed.
Nice one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very true, thank you, Cherry.

j.

[rubie]

we sometimes dress up our language to disguise the meaning of our words, but a wolf in sheep's clothing......

well penned.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, rubie, appreciate your words.

j.

[Shae]

"poetry of dissociation," I love that. Very crafty :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Shae.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Crafty and sly, few words but huge implications in the meanings. Nice work Jacob!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al...
j.

[Pryde Foltz]

A monster unleashed is a monster unleashed … no telling what skyscraper he will choose to scale:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very true....you made me think of godzilla----i have the dvd of the original japanese version as well as English....funny how he was the monster in the first one and later became a hero....maybe sort of like many people are.
thank you, Pryde.

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

Depends on whose side you are invested in, I suppose.

[....................]

this is so spot on...love the use of bilingual and accent marks; words of ill intent masqueraded with flourish eventually lose their colours and are seen for what they are... we can say it in what ever 'language' we wish, the intent remains the same...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, FT. you have such keen insights...

j.

[Chris]

The mind tends to put its own Quote marks around ...thoughts... regardless of the others' approvals. Some observations never get old regardless of age or how often they're seen. Reality has this way of intruding into our view.

So this IS a current piece regardless of the timing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful review.

j.

[Chris]

Don't ya just love "tude" in the mannerisms belying actions and/or voice. Spoken Word is such ...a rare treat or threat(?) in intent and projection.