no prologue necessary

no prologue necessary

 

 

 

foregone conclusion

just one look, intensity

the ending is "us."

 

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/6/16

Reviews

[redzone]

aaah I am a sucker for good endings, especially wrapped around a sweet poem,
nicely done Jacob...

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Curt.

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

You had me on hi
Fireworks burst across the sky
My heart is alive

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like your poetic reply, Pat.

thanks...

j.

[Érenn]

Really good senryu. ^^ I enjoyed it. The title is really fitting. T. The word intensity really delivers the punch for me. I ended up perceiving this write in more than one ways. And that really makes this such a universal one ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Errenn.

j.

[highonwords]

like falling in love at first sight/first glance

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Steph.

j.

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem, a thought stopper, with an enigmatic almost imagist brevity,a poem I will carry with me this Sunday evening...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Leslie...

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

With a twinkle in the eyes, how the aha moment surrounds us.

Clever!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend...

j.