going paperless

 

going paperless

 

 

 

i garner abstract energy

of thought

 

so just imagine

a poem

 

being written

in your mind.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/11/16

Reviews

[Norman 223]

Perfect precis is your trademark, Jacob. You have the ability to transfer your immediacy of thought to an immediacy of written comprehension. I envy your aptitude in this.

Norman

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Norman.

j.

[barleygirl]

As always, the thing I want to see most in a very short write is to have every word selected carefully for maximum meaning & impact. You might be the best at doing this, on this website. As for the message, I've heard of people who write a poem in their minds, but my memory is shot, so I need to commit it to some form of permanence, be it digital or otherwise. I can't even remember an IDEA for a poem, so I have notepads everywhere. Thanks for the interesting read. Of course, I love the same perfectly-crafted line as redzone (below): "i garner abstract energy of thought" . . . so creative!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, barleygirl...

j.

[redzone]

this is a wonderfully written "abstract energy of thought" Jacob... kinda woke me up this morning.. better than coffee, er.. well pretty close... speaking of which, I need another cup of poetry... I know I tease in my comments, but I really appreciate your poetry Jacob, so damn inventive.

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Curt...i appreciate your encouraging words...

j.

[Ed Hart]

imagine, life came round to that...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that would be interesting wouldn't it?

thank you, Ed....

[highonwords]

this one blew me away - a gem of a poem - nice write, j - having word power over a reader's mind - fantastic

steph

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, steph.

j.