count slowly

count slowly

 

 

happy suffocation

smothering kisses

i gasp for breaths of you

choking on sweet exposure

 

you are the hypnotist

i am the suggestion

when we snap awake

 

i won't remember anything

but will feel a tingling

on my lips

 

and smile.

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/28/16

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Deliciously sensual write. Nothing like a kiss that takes your breath away, is there? Lydi**

[Matching Socks]

Aww, I like this.
Close your eyes and count to ten.
It's over before you know it are left wondering if you imagined it. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ana....appreciate your words, and yes, before you know it, it is over.

j.

[Nisreen]

The after effect
like this daze
you get lost in the magic
to wake up to this beautiful feeling

i can relate to this

Beautiful :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Nisreen.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh the charmer and romantic in you. How sweet the words!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al.

j.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

wow, that is lovely. Capturing each moment- rather living each moment. The best way to live life. Great piece. Keep writing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Vatsal...

j.

[DIVYA]

It happens so, that in an ordinary moment something transpires, to spark off such a fantasy. Lifted in an instant, into the clouds, suffocated so pleasantly. Both come back smiling, a great feeling. Great poem and appreciated a lot...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, DIVYA...

j.