Vertex

Vertex

 

 

 

 

bending to the curve of you

symmetrical genius

implies insightful riot

chaotic complement

two become one

a geometrical figure

 

 

the sine and co-sine of love.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/28/16

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Who says math can't be sexy? Loved this one! Lydi**

[Cassie]

Jacob, I think you need to share what you feed your muse so i feed mine too. this is good.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, Cassie.

j.

[James]

Math was never my best subject (History Major), but I get this perfectly.
Very clever.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, James...

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

I was never much on algebra, but this is my idea of an equation.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, KL...
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I can truthfully say I know the geometry and algebra of love. Can I offer you Jacob a small symphony of thanks?

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, Al...thank you...

j.

[Nisreen]

I wonder if love works out like that
with all these angles
and degrees of closeness

I must say you got a way with words and math ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Nisreen....appreciate your kind review.

j.

[Matching Socks]

Very clever. :)
Then comes the sign and co-sign of mortgage and other debt followed by the division of assets when another factor enters the equation.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are so smart...yes, those come too...ugh..
thank you, Ana...

j.

[V]

A mathematical union of two bodies. Your choice of words reads intelligent and witty. Creative way of describing how to make love. I enjoyed reading.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Vanessa.

j.

[DIVYA]

I envision two figures coinciding, so complementary, they fit in together filling the spaces, erasing the gaps. I appreciate much the creative use of geometry to suggest the culmination of love...especially Symmetry, which is considered a very universally desirable physical trait, it makes for great connotation in this lovely poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, DIVYA...

j.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome Jacob..

[Georgina Cross]

Very beautiful, short and sweet.
It's been a while since i've taken a look at your work, apologies!
Regards,
Georgie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind reviews, Georgie.

j.