Vertex

Vertex

 

 

 

 

bending to the curve of you

symmetrical genius

implies insightful riot

chaotic complement

two become one

a geometrical figure

 

 

the sine and co-sine of love.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/28/16

Reviews

[Lorraine Montez]

Like tragic Greek lovers...Isosceles meets Hypotenuse! How very...trigonomic!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, glad i could write something decent here, i was awful at geometry and trigonometry ...read morethank you, glad i could write something decent here, i was awful at geometry and trigonometry ...

:)))

j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very very clever sir. An intellectual way to describe passion.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dale....appreciate your words,
j.

[barleygirl]

Nice weaving of geometrical terms to describe a good loving fit. The word "vertex" is especially meaningful & a great word choice in this scenario.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, barleygirl...

j.

[forgotten_ghosts]

Love and math. I would have never come up with the idea of combining the two..probably because I hate math..but anyway. Great poem,Jacob!
Greetings,
Thomas

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Thomas....many hate math...:))))

j.

[redzone]

you know your poem reminds me of a song by American Breed, "bend me, shape me. anyway you want me, long as you love me it's alright.." how's that for sine/co-sine of love??!!

Jacob, you have taken "geometric" shape, bent it to metaphor of love and presented for our appreciation... pretty damn cool if you ask me...

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, great song...."you've got the power to turn on the light"

thank you for your kind words and the smile, Curt.
j.

[Bacchus]

I'm a huge math nerd...
turning into a poetry one too.
seeing the waves of the graphs of sine and co-sine in my head-
just beautiful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Bacchus...

j.