mute melody

mute melody

 

 

expressive tones,

your eyes are music

i am tone deaf but still feel the magic

 

in your philosophical gaze

as you imply possibilities

with a heart not recovered

 

from another's off-key song...

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/19/16

Reviews

[Autonomous]

"I am tone deaf but still feel the magic." I find this line to resonate with me, there was once a girl I liked who felt the same but I missed the fact by a mile and thus ruined my chances.

As always amazing work Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing, Z....how you relate to this.

j.

[James]

How to make someone who's been burned badly fall in love you?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not easy...thank you, James.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

great title ..first verse is magic ..i like to think of another's"off key" as a bit of Jazz ;)

https://youtu.be/4-6PgkOHagI

please do check it out :)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, E.

and will check it out.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Joanna was magic and I am tone deaf (can you believe I took guitar lessons). So here I am having memories from a poem now read. Joanna happened in 1975. I was 26.

Thanks for the memories Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing, my friend...

j.

[V]

Such lovely word choices, makes me sigh again, the effortlessness you integrated is so nice. I love the musical similes, they made think of someone again, a bittersweet memory.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Vanessa---

and how you related to this.

j.

[V]

It was nice to recall old times. You're welcome.

[Papaya]

Love it! A new song to replace the one we can't get out of our heads.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you reminded me of another song....my friend,

ELO

"and i can't get it out of my head, no no no.."

thank you for your kind words,

j.

[Papaya]

Ha!
And you just reminded me of Kylie Minogues 'can't get you out of my head'. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Ah that attraction to someone new after being burned by another. We try to deny it, but it's there, nonetheless.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, KL...

j.