passion's implant

passion's implant

 

 

short sighted lovers

family operated genes

leave single parent

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/14/17

Reviews

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is amazing, it's very sad and short but it says so many thins

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you.....

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ouch! But so often true. Myopic "forevers" never work, and children pay the hefty price. Great and On-point as always my friend!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for dusting this one off the shelf, and the kind comment, Annette.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You're so welcome. No dust observed! I love all of your work.

[Surya]

A common mistake currently running now a days, mis interpretations and attractions leading to short time love....
A direct hit your poem was...
I enjoyed it...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Surya....appreciate your words,
j.

[B]

Yes fast people are not cool
It's like there will never be any sight present under such prejudgements
and therefore remain alone for life

Well done

[jacob erin-cilberto]

again, such insightful words, thank you,
j.

[Gee]

Folk these days are unwilling to put in the hard hours to make relationships work.
" Do you solemnly agree to count to ten, bite your tongue until bleeding. Remember at all times that this woman you take is another man's daughter, not your property. There is no ownership in marriage, none......"

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, no longer "till death do us part"
but "till the first major disagreement"-

read moreyes, no longer "till death do us part"
but "till the first major disagreement"-

thank you, Gee.
j.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Jacob, absolute truth! Punchy powerful words. Izzy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Izzy...

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

"Single" in more ways than one.
They do the crime; she pays the time--even if the dad kinda helps out.
Yeah, ya gotta watch those "family oriented genes."
Humorous and meaningful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, Jimmy...
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed in today's society there is too much break up. But is it genes or learned behaviour one asks. Your senryu begs the questions well Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, John.
j.

[SSKaitlyn]

Short but sweet. I love how direct it is. Well done

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kaitlyn.

[Relic]

This happens much too often doesn't it. In many cases, some of those who are short sighted don't even care. Their plans are for somewhere else.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Relic.
j.