Defining Love in Precisely Indistinct Elocution

Defining Love in Precisely Indistinct Elocution

 

 

specifically speaking

i generally love you,

 

in the vaguest terms

of absolute certain confusion.

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/31/17

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

While love is a contradiction, it also fulfills just about every one of our needs.
The only thing love won't do is make you smart--except, of course, in the painful sense.
Excellent bit of work!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, only in the painful sense, i am afraid...thank you, Jimmy---

j.

[andrew mitchell]

yes with a head in the clouds! Precision as always J.:):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew...
j.

[Ken Simm.]

Now I do love me some spiral thoughts. Certainty to confusion. Exactly!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ken.
j.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

How "Precisely Indistinct"! Jacob, again you are the WordMeister! I bow to you my friend. Love equals "absolute certain confusion" and you nailed it with this poem. Love it! Kudos!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Annette...
j.

[emmajoy]

More or less precisely but with an indistinct message, please see me after class for further elocution instruction

signed, Con Phewshun

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you're too funny, emma!

thank you, and i will see you after class...
j.

[emmajoy]

Improperly flippant - but couldn't resist it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Go see the principal!

[Shy Joe]

I think love has a map, but it's plastered on the back of a cereal box. Wildly traversed in crayons, drowning in corn flake milk splatter.

I really enjoyed this Mr. J. Thanks for sharing.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i enjoyed your metaphoric reply, Joe...
thank you.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Love is never definable...it is a glorious melange of blurry lines and fireworks. You've said so much in few words. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

for sure man! ;} lengthening my text to more than 25 characters ... the more the merrier right!? :))
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, E.
j.

[B]

lol
that word that often tangles us up in this torment
trying to find a place of clarity
but love is this confusion
and not only that
but adoring that motion sickness in thought

[jacob erin-cilberto]

time for the dramamine...thank you, Look...

j.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is honest words and thoughts. With age, love become more questionable and dangerous. I liked the complete poem. Thank you Jacob for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote..
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.