Confronting Feelings---a Senryu

Confronting Feelings---a senryu

 

 

as our lips ignite

the lovely imposition

dares us to explode

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/7/18

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Some kiss!
Feelings boldly confronted.
Sizzling senryu.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy.
j.

[barleygirl]

Sooooo perfectly inviting! Love your popping originality & the way you choose words to pack a ton of dynamic sensations into so few words! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Margie...
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Nothing quite as enticing and exciting as a kiss. The build up, the magnetism, the fire. You captured it here. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

especially for us "Good" Catholic boys...ha ha.
thanks, Lydi.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

i think that most would find this sensual in a coupling form of view. I find it passionate in my own view at the unlocking of writers block. Those whispers...they search the thoughts...wander through soul...reaching..stirring ...that dare us to release a form of passion .....clicking out the need in words. Magnificent!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, Queenie.
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very nicely penned – a submissive fiery attraction; followed by an ignition of volcanic passion.
Brilliant write ... :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Phill.
j

[Neville]

Don't it just my friend
Short fuses big spark kaboom
Thanks, now where were we............A cool little big write in its own way........N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Neville.
j.

[Neville]

Thank you jacob. I do so enjoy these....N..

[sette]

nice piece of writing jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, sette,
j.

[sette]

you are welcome

[andrew mitchell]

could be another big bang theory on love J, nicely done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .and explore ;) titillating read and inspiration for me morning..thanks jacob!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, E.
j.