slick semantics

slick semantics

 

 

 

language of enormous error

the forgetful prodigy

age deteriorates

determination is backtracking

a lovely rhetoric

beautiful imagery in microphone logic

the applause as if a standing ovation for Shakespeare

 

the hall explodes

someone lit a fuse 

i was burned by my own soliloquy

 

she was determined 

not to be my Juliet...

and i felt the dagger she used on herself 

 

thrust

deep into my heart.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/1/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Juliet is not sticking to the script. I felt the sharps here too, not meant for you, but you got them anyway. Rejection sucks and you are on fire with your pen.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Chris...
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Any rejection has consequences and the capacity to break hearts. Another gem of a write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, andrew,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

All the world is a stage and we mere actors as we say our lines only to be rejected and Juliet killed him rather than herself. Another allegory in this amazing saga Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful and kind words, John,
j.