The Subject of your Sentence

The Subject of your Sentence

 

 

i was just a nondescript pronoun

until you came along and gave me color

made me the noun i always wanted to be

 

the most adverbially modified adjectives

could not describe

my transcription into specific being

nor detail resolutely enough

 

the healing of my heart,

in conjunction with your love.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/24/19 

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

Would that I could parse this sentence ... perhaps the subject here will let you off for good behaviour.
Truly adverbsarial writing.

Well done j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe the Parson can do it? :)))
than you for your words and the smile, Ted,
j.

[redzone]

being in love gives words their meaning and wonderful places within a sentence, hell, even vowels become more bold and colorful... it’s a wonderful feeling isn’t it Jacob...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your colorful review, Curt...always appreciate your visits...
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderfully written and stated. Love can make us come into being, into nouns and names to behold. You, we are grammatically correct "in love."

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i better be...ha ha, being an English teacher....thank you for your words, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Was using it as a metaphor. You are welcome sir Jacob.

[Michael Oliver]

very fine example of how to play with a conceit - the old pedagogue still has it :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Michael,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Brilliant work Jacob. Lost for words!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.