the rain's expectation

the rain's expectation

 

 

 

a drop of purpose

from your eye

 

to my cheek

and an acceptance

from my eye

 

gazing with love

into your heart.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/9/19

Reviews

[Laura Kate]

'A drop of purpose' holds such intention, direction and hope, yet the nature of a tear being so vulnerable and pure. An honest expression of the giving and receiving of love. Such a lovely expression of rare, wholesome sentiments.
Laura.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Laura,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Some moments are sacred and very touching.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew.
j.

[Jon Roggie]

This was worth coming here just to read Patricia's review. I like her take on this one.
I can also see a touching moment shared. One fondly recalled.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i know Jon....her reviews are better than the poems....
thanks for the visit...and your words.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... I love to see the rain's expectation
on my window pane... causing a tear in my eye...
knowing the birds are hiding under the eaves
while the earth receives the moisture intended
for future harvest. May the love be apparent
during Thanksgiving when the Cornucopia holds
the Harvest of fruits and Vegetables. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your caring words, Pat,
j.

[jerry britners writings]

Nothing expresses our feelings more than a tear