written in azure rose

written in azure rose

 

 

 

i rise to a chilled morning's beck and call

the bugle of memories

notes swiftly frosting

with the early bare trees singing background harmony

 

the lines too long for swift momentum

i extend the covers back over my weeping head

 

you are gone

and i am blanketed with musings

that warm my pen

even as my heart turns blue.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/10/19

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and powerful words shared Jacob. One day, us writers, can have the pen and paper, as our last friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, our last friend...i like that....thank you, Coyote.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Jacob.

[Chris Shaw]

Absolutely beautiful Jacob. Such a poignant piece deeply felt. Visual with some wonderful poetic expression. I like very much, title expertly chosen.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you kindly, Chris...you are a very encouraging poet for others...
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

You are always unique and pleasantly surprising.
Clever, creative use of language, your trademark.
A poignant piece, J, amazingly portrayed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Jimmy,
j.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I love the title of the poem. It drew me in first. Love the lines, " … you are gone and I am blanketed with musings that warm my pen even as my heart turns blue." Beautiful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Linda,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Your poem is written with the sadness of musing but the vastness of your bruising. Hearts turning blue as blood in veins run through. May your heart find the harmony for the queen's sake and Saxony. Marvelous Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir...

[Sami Khalil]

"i am blanketed with musings

that warm my pen

even as my heart turns blue."

[Sami Khalil]

"notes swiftly frosting

with the early bare trees singing background harmony



the lines too long for swift momentum"

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Musings come in all forms for a poet, for better or worse.
Another really nice piece of poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dale,
j.

[MCS]

Great read as always. My day kind of started this way too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, MCS,
j.