reflections of self

 

reflections of self

 

 

 

weary bones

of intellectual homophones

exhausted heart 

raised

then

razed

exhausted heart

of intellectual homophones

weary bones

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/20/19

Reviews

[kentuck14]

Wow dude . . . we must be looking in the same mirror!!!!
T

[jacob erin-cilberto]

could be...thank you, T.
appreciate your extended visit and all of your comments, tonight.read morecould be...thank you, T.
appreciate your extended visit and all of your comments, tonight.
j.

[Fran Marie]

raised up razed down
honophones..intellectual little things. to think about..like the way you formed this one.. falls into place nicely

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Fran,
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Homophonous wisdom--indeed, magic.
"Raised" and "razed" make this near-mirror-image different; amazingly, however, not appreciably.
Thou art a wizard, Jacob of the Bronxian Clan!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy....
and wow...you made me think of something with your response....i wonder what my poetry would be like had i lived in Bronx all my life instead of just my first eight and a half years.....

j.