a novel condensed

a novel condensed

 

 

 

 

this is a short poem

about love,

 

 

the end.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/2/19

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Even the most successful love stories end. Death ends relationships, but doesn't have to kill love.

On the other hand, there are plenty of others where the relationship ends and love walks out the door too.

There is a certainly a much condensed novel to be read where love is concerned.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am so glad you didn't find this novel too long and boring, Chris...:))))
thank you for the read and insightful words...
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Brilliant love this Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie...
j.

[Tate Morgan]

The finite works are always the best. Especially when a person like me reads them As I have a 5 second attention span

[jacob erin-cilberto]

about two seconds longer than mine, Tate...ha ha..
thank you for the read and comment, my friend.
j.

[Tate Morgan]

you re welcome jacob

[Ted Kniffen]

What more needs to be said. This could be about a lot of things.
To paraphrase;

"this is a short poem
about life

It ends."

Like love...so exciting when new we can't take it all in...growing more comfortable in our skins until we reach that point where it can't continue.

Another short but good poem j.
Sorry for the liberty I took with your words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

please, Ted....feel free...
i like where you took this.
j.

[Dennis Shanaberg]

Could be interpreted a few ways.
Can see it as either a cheeky poem about about the shallow nature of love stories. Or if the last line is focused on, a commentary on how all love stories must end. Perhaps, it's both.
Regardless, I'm increasingly fascinated by how much meaning you are able to pack into so few words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Dennis, thank you for your visit and interpretations of this piece,
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Short and ... hmmm ... could be interpreted either sweet or tragic ...depending on the contents of the novel! Nice one my friend ... :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Phill,
go where you will....i am good with that.
sweet or tragic...in mind, both.
j.

[DIVYA]

'the end'
How well you captured the full essence of love. It ends.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:))))
thank you, DIVYA.............
j.