immovable feast II

immovable feast II

 

 

nudges interest

his decline becomes recline

then she consumes him

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/5/19

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Love middle line especially . . . such is life & love! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's amazing sometimes how an insect's life might reflect a human life.
thank you, Margie.read moreit's amazing sometimes how an insect's life might reflect a human life.
thank you, Margie.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Early part of the previous century, consumption took a lot of people.
Don't believe it was the Black Widow variety, however.
Small poem with a big wallop!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my no, Jimmy, it was not....Tuberculosis...which took several of Emily Dickinson's friends in their teens...
interesting where you took this...metaphorically...much like "the sick rose" by william blake...
thank you for your visit.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

I bet he wishes he hadn't aroused that spark. Nothing like the roar of a scorned woman. I can see him retreating from the heat and quickly. Don't play with fire. You could get burned :)

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris...

[DIVYA]

In some situations, we either consume or get consumed. To me this seems a war of wills with an obvious victor. A woman scorned is to be feared.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah yes....the fear is in the right place...thank you, DIVYA.
j.

[kentuck14]

reminds me of the old song . . . "Go ahead, take another little piece of my heart baby!"
T

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah...Big Brother and the Holding Company with Janis.
great song...thanks for your visit, T.read moreah...Big Brother and the Holding Company with Janis.
great song...thanks for your visit, T.
j.

[MomzillaNC]

You're in a dark frame of mind, eh?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

believe it or not...no...not at all....i often write dark poetry, but am usually a good mood, especially when the muse visits.
thank you for your visit, and your kind comments, Momz....
j.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome

[andrew mitchell]

Funny that! And Nice brevity to capture the moment!

[andrew mitchell]

Nice brevity J, reminds me of a praying mantis having a beer with the caption " Might as well have another one, she's going to bite my head off anyway when I get home". This comment is for immovable feasts one. My computer froze on this site again!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for both of your comments, my friend.
j.

[Chris]

Every smile
Became the dream...
I died within.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a way to go...within a dream...hopefully a pleasant one...thank you, Chris.
j.

[Chris]

Sigh... well, it really is one to think on for a bit - wasn't it...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, my friend, yes.

[redzone]

I know you always say, that you write and the reader interprets... true enough I think, so as I read this senyru I thought, aaah Death, a woman.. then again it could be Love where even with decline, resistance is futile.... once again your words capture us 'poor, innocent' readers which is exactly what good art does, consuming us with feelings...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Curt,
j.