frozen tundra meets the Bermuda Triangle

frozen tundra meets the Bermuda Triangle

 

 

 

it's ninety degrees outside

but below zero in my heart

 

deep freeze,

contains, retains

obtains 

a softening

a reckoning

a defrosting

 

it can move again

beat again

 

but also get devoured again

 

and eventually

disappear

freezer burns and all.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/21/19

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

it's a bit like a black hole that just disappears in itself as if it were never there....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Stella...thank you for your visit,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

The mystery of love and the Permuda triangle are unfolded in your words. The danger of disappearance is so real. Ships go unnoticed off radars, even planes. Love has that effect as your marvelously portray. Kudos, sir.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Jacob...

[Lydia Shutter]

I liked the rhyming and staccato lines. The heart can be broken and repaired many times.....sometimes too often if you ask me. We all search for love and even after losing it painfully, we go after it again. Good one. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Lydi,
j.