Cover Blurb

Cover Blurb

 

 

 

in the aftermath

of the prelude

i saw you leaving

long before our story

began.

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/22/19

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

another sad comment on a broken relationship, even before one has a chance to tell his/her story; very distressing. But life is often like that. Sh-t happens when you least expect it. nice poem , and I love the concise, meaningful style.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that s--ff does happen....:)
thank you for your kind words,
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Your welcome!

[R.E. Ray]

I think men (and women) who've "read" extensively know something others don't just from the cover. I think all those experiences, stored as cues, inform the mature reader and save time. Much substance in a few words, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

true there are signals we can decipher...thank you, R.E.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Over before it started....sad, but perhaps a blessing. If someone leaves before "reading" the whole story, perhaps they should not be in your life. Good one. Lydi***

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Cover blurb written on a book of empty pages.
Sad or merciful? You'll, probably, never know.
We, humans, know beginnings and endings--rarely, the significance
of our life stories.
Great bit of poetry!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, these days the journey seems to be the meaningless part...only the results matter.
thank you, Jimmy,
j.

[Beccy]

Be nice in one way, if we could take a peek at the last couple of pages of a relationship before we buy the 'book.' Then again, I personally prefer 'whodunnits,' warts and all. Far more interesting are they not than your average and rather predictable Mills and Boon bodice ripper. :))

Beccy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Beccy,
I totally agree with you...warts and all and indeterminate endings..
thank you for your comments,
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Beccy,
I totally agree with you...warts and all and indeterminate endings..
thank you for your comments,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

A premonition maybe that it was all over before it even got started. That might have been a lost opportunity. Gone forever. I am thinking here, nothing ventured, nothing gained.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so true, Chris, so true.
thank you for your visit and words,
j.

[kentuck14]

At least the attachment wasn't as great as it might have been! It was good the speaker was paying attention to the prelude!
T

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, very good...thank you, T.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Just love this I don’t have words to suffice thanks 🙏

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Julie,
j.

[DIVYA]

The prelude precluded any further development in the story. Maybe the prelude was the story, fatal and brief. The aftermath seems to say it all.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA,
j.