Poem

Poem

 

 

you gave me 

a blank stare

 

so

 

 

i wrote on it.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/28/2020

Reviews

[Cassie]

I do no think you are ever empty, as for me my paper has been blank for sometime..need to follow your advise

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you look hard enough...you will see your words there on the page, waiting to be written.
thank you, Cassie,
j.

[Jon Roggie]

Creating atmosphere,
if only to meet the limit.

the world was quiet,
the trees had stopped swaying with the breeze.

Given a slate,
blank of face,
I wondered...
after a moment,
I decided.

I should.

Flipping review limits...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think you just wrote "Poem 2" with your review.
thank you, Jon,
j.

[Jon Roggie]

I admit I have problems with the review limits.
I did like the words!

[paul sal.....]

Emptiness longs for filling

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, paul,
nice to see you back around....it's been years.
j.

[BlackRose]

What Lydia said. Love this short piece and the hilarity of it. How DARE you stare at me! But not for long! Lol. Reminds me of one I wrote similar I'm sure you've read and commented on.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, BlackRose,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL Wonderful! Hey, anything that is blank deserves your words! Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:))))))
thank you, Lydi...

[.]

It's so easy for you.... Even blank can be poetic.... Wow

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dreamer,
j.

[John the Baptist]

Only poets can write on blank stares. Others might be charged with assault.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are too funny...thanks John.
j.

[duff]

Nicely done my friend. I like it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, duff,
j.

[X]

Ah....Brilliant Jacob !!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kira,
j.

[X]

Sometimes the simplest things have the biggest impact :)