Poem

Poem

 

 

you gave me 

a blank stare

 

so

 

 

i wrote on it.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/28/2020

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Blank Page Challenge aced-Period- drop mike! Love it j.! Brief but brilliant.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Annette,
j.

[Fran Marie]

Clever you; a shot
of ink on a blank
page goes a long
way turning it
into a nice gem

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Fran,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Got to love blank stares ... there is so much to do with them. You could slap a little paint on it or in our case produce words that will define that look.

Writers can do so much good ... or harm.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is the truth...Emily D. once said "words have the power to kill and the power to heal"
thank you, Ted,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Oh yes. How a poet loves a blank page. They just have to leave their footprints on it. Wonferful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Chris,
j.

[Rose]

Ah. This is how I feel about a blank canvas awaiting transformation. These white pages are the caterpillar and we are the metamorphosis, changing it and shaping it into something beautiful. Amazing as always ❤️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Rose,
j.

[Neville]

I am gonna have to start calling you Midas ... this little ingot is clearly 24 carrot ..

Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Neville,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are on a roll today Jacob. Another powerful piece conveyed in few words that have impact in their brevity, disappointment and hurt as the rejected turns their feelings into poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, John,
j.