violation

violation

 

 

stripping trees

assault

 

deadly

the fallout

 

it's over, voyeurs

go home

 

 to your winter.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/1/2020

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This one for me has a political slant. Directed at those who are looking for a mountain in a mole hill. They won't find it. Accept the election result and get on with your lives. They are hard enough anyway without making it even more difficult. That's were my mind drifted Jacob. A pointed little piece of brevity with much wisdom in it.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I find it interesting how current events can sway our reading of poetry...i like that.
thank you, Chris,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now why is it I see every word coated with the ash of an American election that hopefully ends four years of serious disquiet across the globe because of one man? Short and punchy and meaningful Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

again....interesting....how we interpret...thank you for this...
j.

[AJNJ]

voyeurs...always lapping up destruction and drama...while there's endless winter in their own hearts...A poem that punches me...silent introspection...makes me think of all those times I reveled in voyeurism too....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, AJNJ,
j.