definitions pleading

definitions pleading

 

 

 

poem:

a conceptualization 

of fact,

with no concrete basis

 

just a whim

of inspiration

to make up life

or rend reality

 

until we bring it to its knees

one word at a time.

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/8/2020

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

One word may become the foundation for the tree of knowledge where growth brings branches new to be travelled. But do these paths have to have meaning maybe some are just for fun.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, andrew,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

One word at a time....that is how a poem is written. So like a journey of one step at a time. A word sparks our mind and the poem is off and running. Sometimes the destination is the circular file, but more often it is a good poem....like this one. lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lydi,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

I thought of all the whims I have had. I thought of all the first lines I wrote. I am thankful for the poems I managed to complete. Many words were abandoned on the journey.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Isn't it cool, a phrase falls out of the air, and then we act upon it.
thank you, Chris.
read moreIsn't it cool, a phrase falls out of the air, and then we act upon it.
thank you, Chris.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

That's the way it goes :)

[Patricia]

Oooo, very well done, of course, I find this very true and something we strive for with every line, every carefully chosen word creating a string of pearls, wisdom even. As always a pleasure to read your work. One word at a time

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Pat,
j.

[Corset]

what we do without definitions to help us crack that word safe wide open :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love that....the "word safe"----
thank you, Corset, I always appreciate your reads and reviews.
j.

[MCS]

you got that right, one word at a time placed in the best order and magic happens case in point
thank you for sharing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yep, first one foot, then the next.
oh, and that might make for iambic pentameter...
thank you for your words, MCS...

[Fairy Khan]

Yes. Exactly. We start with nothing, an idea, a feeling and we make it complete word by word, idea by idea, feeling by feeling.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that is what we do. Thank you, Fairy,
j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed often we start off with a mere wisp of cognitive awareness which forms from the mist into whatever we wish. Real or imagined but indeed those who write it have the power to take it where they wish. Short and as always stimulating Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

gotta love those wisps...
thank you, John,
j.