Magic Carpet Ride

Magic Carpet Ride

you touch me with your empathetic eyes

and the skin of my heart

warms to your tactile embrace

my soul flinches with pleasure

we mutually accept blame for love

gratefully floating with the consequence

erin-cilberto

12/4/2020

Reviews

[barleygirl]

It has been DECADES since I remember love/affection slowly melting me like this, so it would indeed be a Magic Carpet Ride, if it were to ever occur again! *wink! wink!* Happy New Year! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Margie, and happy new year to you as well.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is magical
Beautiful

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie,
j.

[Dave Brown]

A magic carpet ride could be the solution to almost anything
Currently, masks would be mandatory

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Yes, they would. Thank you, Dave,
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

"Well, you don't know what we can see ..."
and if there is anywhere we'd rather be I'm sure it would be anywhere but in the middle of this medically induced coma ...
at least it gives us the chance to think and write.

accepting blame for love and floating with the consequences ... lovely thought j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Ted,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

I love magic carpets and magic carpet rides. The delicate pattern that comes from Persia, few other countries are woven laboriously by hand, many are women who pass the trade down. Your pen sir is woven with intricate questions and answers about life, love and human relationships. Let us ship it all to warm the homes and beautify the lives of others.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your really kind review, Sami.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir.

[Chris Shaw]

What a great title this poem has. Not only that, it is such an uplifting little write. We all want a magic carpet.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris,
j.