what say you

what say you

 

 

here say ….

there say...

 

you say

i say

 

say say what needs to be said

heard, bantered about

 

freedom is a notion

a potion for understanding

 

differences

indifferences

 

allotting space

to each race, religion and reflex

 

deference is human

difference is human

hate is inhumane

human is the pain

 

love is a cure

in the experimental stage

since the beginning of time

of space, of race of religion, of reflex

 

but we are too slow

improvement,

we have had the chance to dance

 

together forever

but sever 

 

the notion

till no potion

 

can reattach

our hearts

 

what say you

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/15/2020

Reviews

[sette]

hate is inhumane

human is the pain talking about the same mood i am in right now this poem really sets a perfect time for me to dwell what happened today thanks for this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Hey, thanks for your words, sette,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

We have not had the chance to dance for so many years. There is the Dance of Life...
We all have worn out our Shoes... and now sing the Blues. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am looking for a new pair of shoes...thank you, Pat,
j.

[Laz K.]

The unity and love this poem speaks of can only happen on an individual level.
On the technical level, this piece is very well-put together - which is no surprise, of course.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind review, Laz,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

I say I really like this poem and the message it contains. This year has been a nightmare, world over. We all have a common enemy. The virus should unite us in recognising that there is far more we have in common than what we disagree about. Much more tolerance a d understanding needed.

Take a bow Jacob. Wonderful write.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words, Chris,
j.