those stupid wildebeests

those stupid wildebeests 

 

 

post my tears on your blog

for all to see

you won't get many views

 

because they are diluted

with pride,

I have a lion's intuition

you will have other prey

but your computer will short circuit

like your heart.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/1/21

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Technology is great but it comes at a price of turning us into anemotional computer.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, thank you, Dale,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear J, what a metaphor here. The final four lines of this short poem speak volumes. A lion's intuition is as sharp as you can get. There is a sharp edge to this poem. Have a lovely weekend dear friend.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Chris,
j.

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent and not at all about wilderbeasts. I love and agree with the subtlety here Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Ken,
appreciate your visit.
j.

[John the Baptist]

Has a bitter sound to it, this one. Sounds as though someone was jerked around, then left to hang and twist in the wind. Lessons never cease.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Nope, never do...thank you, John,
j.