Reckless Abandon

Inspired by Fran's "Springtime Fantasy"

Reckless Abandon

lovely art

the shapes of words so sensual

the curvature of letters

in tandem with fingers

that write them between sheets

of allure

there is inert beauty

that is born to move

as themes whisper softly to each other

when the moon listens intently

to the love expressed

as bodies compose

lovely art

the poem begotten

gently

exposed

touched

the skin of syllables

when poems meet

an affair

read

savored

touched as

lovely art

demands.

erin-cilberto

1/9/22

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A reckless abandon has that atmosphere of being free and being at oneself without studying the consequences. The expression of being free.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew.
j.

[William Michael Reeves]

I feel like that was the smoothest poem of yours I've read. Absolutely love the idea of being allured by the sexy curves of letters. Copulating fingers touching the skin of syllables. What an excellent poem!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Bill,
j.

[W.k.kortas]

I think you have checked off the boxes for "lovely" and "art" here quite nicely.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, W.k.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! well done says i! your poem captures the heart and soul of artists and poets who combine there talents .. in words and paint ... deeply emotive for me .. i can feel the passion and commitment to get a "piece" just right .. so it fully expresses the desires of the authors ... best tribute to artists and art of all kinds that i have read here .. at the Cafe' .. nice work .. going to check on Fran now .. :)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, E.
j.

[Lathen Griffiths]

This is lovely Jacob, I shall have to go and find ‘Springtime Fantasy’ by Fran now.

Regards

Lathen

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Lathen, thank you...I really like the avatar.
"Alas poor Yorick..I knew him Horatio!"

[Chris Shaw]

Fran has inspired a wonderful piece here J. Yes, we put alot of love and passion into the shape of our lines as we pen our poetry. I am in bed with poetry now as I write this :) Fabulous metaphors here my dear friend..

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I won't tell your significant other, and thank you.
Fran's piece is pretty wonderful stuff.read moreI won't tell your significant other, and thank you.
Fran's piece is pretty wonderful stuff.
j.

[Lisasview]

Always enjoy reading your poems Jacob.
Full of great metaphors..which I love as it makes me think.
Lisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lisa,
j.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome..
Lisa

[Betty Hermelee]

Poetry shapes itself as art just a the passion of sensual desire shapes itself in a pattern of art. Both Are designed to be as perfect as a full moon, as sensual and juicy as a ripe peach. So well penned J… I had to read it a few times to savor each word.
Best
B.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words, Betty,
j.

[Fran Marie]

oh my I'm more than elated
to think my poem inspired
this; overjoyed as Divya said
This is beautifully penned
Jacob as are all your poems
so many great lines
when poems meet
an affair
read
savored
touched as
lovely art

demands...lovely

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Fran, thank you for your kind words, and for the inspiration...you had as much to do with this piece as I did.
j.

[Fran Marie]

you are too kind
sincere thank you s again
dear friend😊

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

the skin of syllables

Love that line, this is so good, like the imagery I got from this piece

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kesch,
j.