Complete

Complete

feel the poem

sift through your eyes

which act as fingers

in tactile form

erin-cilberto

1/26/22

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You had me here sifting flour through my fingers. I was making pastry. The eyes are our windows. We see the words and our heart feels them. I have always loved the power of words. I like where you took me J.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like where you went, thank you, Chris,
j.

[Fran Marie]

reminds me when I was 6
and reading across the
page of a book with my
fingers under each word
so I could see it more clearly
strange where poems take the
reader..nice work

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I used to do the same thing, Fran.
j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The eyes are windows to the soul so they say. Poetry throws back the sash on the windows and lets in the light. Great short piece. F.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you kindly, Fabian,
j.

[Lathen Griffiths]

I really enjoy these short poems and feel they open up so many lines of thinking for those reading…


Lathen

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Lathen,
j.

[M. J. Smith]

Would that be concrete poetry? 🙂
Our eyes acting as fingers...
Something vaguely surreal about that. Have I met the Picasso of verse? 😄

[jacob erin-cilberto]

definitely no Picasso, but thank you, M.J.
j.

[Kim S.]

Short, and to the point, well said.
Enjoyed this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, beckie,
j.

[Kim S.]

not a problem